The charts below give information about travel to and from France, as well as the most popular countries for French citizens to visit in 2000.

The charts below give information about travel to and from France, as well as the most popular countries for French citizens to visit in 2000.
The line chart presents the changes in the
number
of trips to and from
France
from 1980 to 2000
while
the bar chart indicates the levels of popularity among five nations French
citizens
travelled to in 2000. Units are measured in millions of
visitors
.
Overall
, the
number
of trips to and from
France
increased over the twenty-year period, with outbound travel roughly double the rate of
visitors
to
France
. Meanwhile, Germany received the highest
number
of French
visitors
in 2000. In 1980, the
number
of
visits
abroad by French
citizens
was nearly 14
million
, which was about 3
million
higher than the
number
of
visits
to
France
by overseas residents. In the following years, both these figures increased, but the
number
of trips abroad by French
citizens
became increasingly higher than the
number
of journeys to
France
made by foreigners. In 2000, the
number
of
visits
to
France
reached around 52
million
while
the
number
of
visits
to
France
was about half of that. Looking at the second chart, Germany was the most popular destination for French
citizens
in 2000, with close to 12
million
visitors
.
This
was followed by Portugal, which received around 9
million
French
visitors
. As for the remaining countries, their levels of popularity were far lower, with around 3.5
million
visitors
on average.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, france, citizens, visitors, visits, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 9 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Economic development
  • Globalization
  • Cross-cultural exchanges
  • Tourist attractions
  • Cultural affinity
  • Historical links
  • Geographical trends
  • Proximity factors
  • Regional preferences
  • Promotional campaigns
  • Seasonal travel patterns
  • Preference
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