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The table below shows the information about spending on health in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the information about spending on health in five different countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the percentage of total expenditure on healthcare in five different nations namely
Japan
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, Italy,
Germany
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,
France
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 and the
USA
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 in 2002.
Overall
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, the highest proportion of total budget spending on health was exhibited in
France
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 and the opposite can be seen in
Japan
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. In 2002, accounting for 11.4%, the highest amount of money expended on health belonged to
France
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, followed by
Germany
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 and the
USA
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 with 9.3% and 8.6%, respectively. The figure for Italy was 7.7% - lower than 3.7% compared with the highest. The Japanese spent the lowest percentage of their total expenditure which was just 7.2%. More specifically, looking at the public spending category,
France
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 expended the highest quantity among 5 countries - 8,6%. The proportion of
Germany
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 and the
USA
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 were 7% and 6%, respectively.
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 the total expenditure of Italy was higher than
Japan
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's, the public spending of Italy was lower than
Japan
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's 0.5%.
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, in the private spending section, the highest spending on health was still witnessed in
France
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 - 2.8%. The figure for
Germany
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 was 2.3%,
whereas
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 the
USA
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's was 2.6% -
in contrast
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 with the total sector. The quantity of Italy was 2.4% - just lower than the highest 0.4%. In
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 category,
Japan
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 still spent the least with just 1.4%
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, germany, france, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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