You have an issue with your neighbor. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter: - Describe the issue. - Explain how it is affecting you. - Suggest a solution.
Dear Mr. Anderson,
I hope
this
message finds you well. My name is Jacob Brown, and I live next door to you. I am writing to bring to your attention a concern regarding the construction work being carried out in your basement.
For the past two weeks, the noise from the drilling, which primarily occurs in the evenings, has been quite disruptive. It seems that floor work may also
be taking place concurrently, further
intensifying the disturbance.
This
situation is having a considerable impact on my physical and mental well-being. I typically go to bed at 7 p.m
., but due to
the noise, I am unable to fall asleep until around 11 p.m
. As a result
, I wake up feeling drained and suffer from persistent headaches throughout the day.
To mitigate this
issue, I suggest discussing with your contractor the possibility of rescheduling the construction work to between 11 a.m
. and 2 p.m
. This
adjustment would significantly reduce the disruption to my daily routine.
Thank you for your understanding and consideration. I hope we can find a solution that addresses this
concern.
Best regards,
Jacob BrownSubmitted by Mrjit147 on
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To achieve a higher score, consider providing a bit more context or elaboration on the personal impact. For instance, how the headaches affect your daily activities or why you need to wake up early.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that paragraphs transition smoothly to maintain the flow of the letter. For example, a concluding remark that ties back to your initial greeting can provide a satisfying wrap-up.
task achievement
Clearly described the issue and its impact, meeting the requirements of the task.
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Maintained a polite and respectful tone throughout the letter.
coherence cohesion
Organized the letter well with clear paragraphs, each addressing a specific point.