The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
the line chart compares the numbers of international travellers
visited
Correct pronoun usage
who visited
in
five countries, which is Brazil, Egypt, Malaysia, France and the USA, for the period from 1995 to 2010.
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Overall
, it is clear that
the USA had the most international tourists over the 15 years, while
both Egypt and Brazil nearly had the least compared with others. In addition
, France had significantly gone up over the period.
It is noticeable that the USA had 70 million
international farers in 1995, which is more than the other four countries combined, and reached a peak of 90 million
in 2005, and then
fell slightly to 85 million
in 2010. Although
there were only 30 million
international tourists for
France in 1995, the number doubled in the next five years, and Change preposition
in
then
mildly increased to 80 million
, the same as the US in 2010.
When it comes to Malaysia, the number of international travellers gradually rose from 20 million
in 1995 to 45 million
in the next 15 years. Egypt and Brazil experienced the same rising trend with number
of below 10 Change the article
a number
the number
million
in 1995 to 20 million
and 15 million
in 2010 respectively.Submitted by mikezhao223 on
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