The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. 

Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
the line chart compares the numbers of international travellers
visited
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in
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five countries, which is Brazil, Egypt, Malaysia, France and the USA, for the period from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the USA had the most international tourists over the 15 years,
while
both Egypt and Brazil nearly had the least compared with others.
In addition
, France had significantly gone up over the period. It is noticeable that the USA had 70
million
international farers in 1995, which is more than the other four countries combined, and reached a peak of 90
million
in 2005, and
then
fell slightly to 85
million
in 2010.
Although
there were only 30
million
international tourists
for
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France in 1995, the number doubled in the next five years, and
then
mildly increased to 80
million
, the same as the US in 2010. When it comes to Malaysia, the number of international travellers gradually rose from 20
million
in 1995 to 45
million
in the next 15 years. Egypt and Brazil experienced the same rising trend with
number
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a number
the number
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of below 10
million
in 1995 to 20
million
and 15
million
in 2010 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • international tourist arrivals
  • insight
  • trend
  • significant
  • fluctuation
  • statistic
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • surge
  • data point
  • comparative
  • quantitative analysis
  • economic factor
  • political stability
  • tourism sector
  • global event
  • destination popularity
  • benchmark
  • year-on-year change
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