The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the present building of a college and plan for changes to the college site in the future. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The left map shows the present layout of a collage building, and the

right

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map illustrates a reconstruction

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the building in 2020.

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, both

parking

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the parking

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area

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and

main

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the main

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building will be expanded in the future.

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, the footpath and garden will be removed at that time. Delving the reconstructions into details, the footpath and garden will be removed in 2020, west part of the space be used to expand the car park

area

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, east part of the space will extend the college main building. Now there are three classrooms inside the building, after six years there will be five classrooms in total, four of them are located at

right

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side of the building,

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the reception

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will be shifted to the center of the building, and the library will move to bottom

right

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corner of the building.

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, the entrance by footpath will modify to the south

area

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near the bus stop.

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the toilet will be moved to the north

area

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. Next to

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the toilet

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toilet

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toilet,

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there will be a shop facility which is at the up

right

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corner of the building in the future. Lunch

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and one classroom are between the shop and the library.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words right, area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

198 words

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