The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the difference in
maximum
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for Asian
elephants
from 1994 to 2007. It is apparent that the
number
of
elephants
in India and
in
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China are observed to be the
most
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and the lowest respectively. Only the
number
of
elephants
in Cambodia and Laos did not decrease over the period.
According to
the graph, a considerable decline in the
number
of
elephants
took place in India from almost 10,000 to around 7,500 throughout the period. There was a
siginificant
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significant
fall in the
figure
for
elephants
in Malaysia and Thailand, representing from 3,000 to 1,000 and from around 3,700 to around 1,300 respectively. Regarding Vietnam, Sri Lanka, Myanmar, and China, the
figure
for
elephants
dropped slightly in all nations by no more than 1,000 over 13 years.
While
there was a period of stability in the
number
of
elephants
in
Loas
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Laos
at approximately 1,200, the
figure
for
elephants
in Cambodia illustrated a gentle rise from around 1,300 in 1997 to 1,500 in 2004.
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  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trend
  • decline
  • increase
  • decrease
  • population
  • significant
  • dramatic
  • stability
  • data
  • estimate
  • notable
  • comparative
  • contrast
  • approximately
  • maximum
  • over the period
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