the two maps illustrate changes that have taken place in an area from 1995 to the present

The map illustrates how an

area

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has changed from 1995 to now.

Overall

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, the

area

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has become more modern, having cut out some of the natural beauty

while

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constructing some buildings and residential areas and providing more options for entertainment to meet the demands of people. From 1995 to these days, the residential

area

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in the top left corner, on both sides of the road, has been extended to provide more accommodation for residents in the town.

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the road has been lengthened

further

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toward the West side of the

area

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Moreover

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, the farmland in the northeast corner of the map has been renovated and expanded into a golf course with a small tennis playground, where the forest park used to be.

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, the hotel was sited on the East side of the town in 1995, it is now widened for the car park. To the left of the hotel, the shop and the fish market on both sides of the road have been replaced by the restaurant and the apartment. The cafe in the bottom right of the town has stayed unchanged. The fishing port in the middle of the seashore has vanished.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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194 words

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