The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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maximum number of Asian elephants given certain periods between 1994 and 2004 was shown in that picture.
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Overall
, it can be pointed out from the graph that, India was the maximum while
China was the minimum over the given period.
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, 2004 was higher by about 10% than in 1994. In comparison, China was popular throughout out
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Also
, the big increase belonged to Indian India while
the maximum was under 10000 and the minimum 7000. However
, India lowest result for high-rises than different countries for a certain period.
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, Vietnam, Columbia, and China with regard to one another. So only in 2004
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