The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The diagram represent a well-structured system aiming to collet minutely accurate information on the weather. It consist of 4 sections, each corresponding to an organized pathway to tackle a certain challenge in

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process: information gathering, analyzing, preparing and broadcasting.

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, the incoming data gets collected using satellites, radars and drifting buoys. Each of the mentioned data gets specially analyzed and prepared to use in forecasting: satellites are used to reproduce satellite photos, radar screens represent radars and drifting buoys correspond with synoptic charts.

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in turn helps represent an outlook on the future weather. The gathered data, adopted the means described earlier,

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gets unified utilizing a computer; the end result of which is what we call weather broadcast. Following that,

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report will be aired using several technologies

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as TV news, radios and recorded announcements.

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process ensures the spreading of a reliable and up to date material with minimum errors.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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3 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Meteorology
Accurate weather forecasts
Satellite images
Radar
Drifting buoys
Central forecasting office
Dedicated communication channels
Analyzed and interpreted
Meteorologists
Advanced computer models
Weather predictions
Distributed
General public and specific stakeholders
Television, radio, internet
Continuous updates
Ever-changing nature

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