The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
The above map shows the difference between 1995 and
present
Correct article usage
the present
due to
the development of the village of Ryemouth
. Most of the areas are developed into residential Correct your spelling
Tynemouth
area
, sports Fix the agreement mistake
areas
court
and Fix the agreement mistake
courts
restaurant
.
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
At
the northeast side of the village, farmland and forest park have been demolished, and turned into a golf and tennis zone, encouraging more sports activities among people. It Change preposition
On
also
can be seen that more housing area
were built in the northwest to west side as there is an Fix the agreement mistake
areas
increasement
in Correct your spelling
increase
household
that reside in. Fix the agreement mistake
households
New
road Add an article
The new
A new
was
Change the verb form
was also constructed
also
construct to give way to enter the new housing area
.
In the south area
, initially
there were shops that Add a comma
initially,
have been
replaced with Wrong verb form
were
restaurant
and Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
fish
market was Correct article usage
the fish
also
changed to apartments near the sea between 1995 to
present. The fishing port at the coastline Correct word choice
and to
have
been removed Correct subject-verb agreement
has
thus
people will have a wider view of the sea. The café facing hotel
in the southeast Correct article usage
the hotel
area
of the village remained the same.Submitted by izziannblh on
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