Some people believe that life in a big city is difficult while others say that it is more convenient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities?
Most
people
argue that life in the metropolitan city
is more challenging another has an opinion it is more comfortable. There are some benefits likewise
available highest level education while
some drawbacks such
as traffic jams and social problems.
The positive is staying in a big city
more easy to access public facilities. The train is available in the urban Centre’s many people
who live there where can use transportation to help with their activities, for example
, working and studying, In contrast
, if we are staying in a rural area it is difficult to use public facilities. Besides
that, Universities are always open in the major cities, so if people
want to study at a high level of education where they need to move metropolis to study.
There are some drawbacks to people
staying in the cityscape. The first one is traffic jams because the majority of people
move to a large city
to get work and they want to study at university. As a result
, the impact is overpopulation. The second one is social problems, for instance
, many people
are unemployed, and they require living costs, so if they do have not money to survive, such
as they will commit a crime like robbery and theft to fulfil their living costs. Consequently
, it increases crime in big cities compared to small towns.
To sum up
, there are some benefits to life in a metropolitan city
. The general population not only an easy to access public facilities but also
gets a high-level education. Nevertheless
, there are some drawbacks such
as social problems and increasing criminalization.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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In your introduction, better delineation of the contrasting views could improve clarity.
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There are a few grammatical errors and awkward phrases; try to proofread and use varied sentence structures for better clarity.
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Make sure each paragraph has a clear central idea and provide more specific examples to support your points.
coherence cohesion
Ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs to enhance coherence.
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Expand on the points to add depth and richness to the essay.
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The essay identifies both advantages and disadvantages of living in a big city, addressing the prompt well.
coherence cohesion
The essay is structured with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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The main points are clear and relevant to the topic.
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Efforts to give examples, even though they could be more detailed.
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