Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinion in this?
Although
Medicine
is a field
which has a myriad of branches with a lot of fascinating and impressive ways of studying it, one of the most awe-inspiring characteristics is, without a doubt, its well-balanced relationship among natural, formal and social sciences. This
mixture leads to a wide spectrum of complex stumbling blocks which requires an appropriate combination of curiosity and multidisciplinarity to solve them. From a very early age, this
aroused my interest and prompted me to study not only the structure of the human body and physiology but also
the mechanisms of pathogenesis with the respective treatments.
My Bachelor’s Degree in Medical Science (Medical Doctor, MD), which was studied at Universidad Militar Nueva Granada in Bogotá, Colombia, was a complete training in both clinical and research
fields using analytical methods as well as
evidence-based medicine
techniques. The integration of these aspects along with
acquiring the basic knowledge about natural sciences, such
as cellular biology, biophysics, biochemistry, anatomy, histology, etc, showed me how perfect the functionality and homeostasis of human beings is, however
, it still lacks information. Since then
, Health Sciences became a passion for me, showing a high academic performance with award scholarships being granted due to
‘The Class of Honors Qualification’, and achieving the best GPA over 52 alumni in my class graduating students.
Over time and parallel to my academic duties, my career interests in the research
field
constantly increased. In the beginning, they were focused on Stem Cells, Genetics & Genomics, and Bioethics, taking an elective course for three years related to these branches in which there were theoretical and practical immersive sessions. Hence
, exploring deeper into the most specific literacy and research
done from ancient times to the present day as well as
learning cutting-edge techniques about cultures, analysis, and methodology, finally
being part of the ‘BioGenEtica Research
Group’ at the above-mentioned University. After that, my research
experience broadened to other topics linked to microbiology and parasitology, researching mainly diseases caused by helminths and protozoa that affect children in Colombia. These projects have been presented at several not only national but also
international symposiums and conferences as well as
have been published in indexed journals.
Regarding my work experience, during the last
academic year, which is known as ‘The Internship’, the general clinical rotations were deeper in knowledge about Pediatrics, Surgery, and Gynecology and Obstetrics, and my elective program consisted of seven months related to Internal Medicine
. Subsequently
, after my graduation, my clinical performance was focused on the Internal Medicine
field
mainly related to critical care
, emergency room, and inpatient health care
. Additionally
, taking specific continuing education courses to learn the most innovative strategies about COVID-19 management and fundamental critical care
support certified by The Society of Critical Care
Medicine
.
Based on the aforementioned and after my backgrounds and experiences in all scenarios, namely academic, work, and research
, not only my critical thinking and problem-solving skills have been developed faster but also
the
relationship with The Technological Change the word
my
Field
has awakened my interest. This
is mostly because there are endless tools and techniques that have rocketed the bioinformatics and health informatics research
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