The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This

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report derives from the flow chart which enumerates the

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of manufacturing

sugar

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from

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cane.

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, the illustration includes the seven long steps

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the

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.

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, the knotty procedure is progressed by equipped farmers and specific machines.

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, it takes around twelve to eighteen months to grow a

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cane. It is

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harvested by the farmers

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underwent

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the crushing phase by machinery and

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into juice form.

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, a different device, a limestone filter, is used to

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the juice.

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, the purified juice will become

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syrup

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after the evaporating

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. And

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is done by a big evaporator with a high temperature.

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, the syrup is sorted

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sugar

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crystals by an equipment called centrifuge.

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, we can get a complete form of

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after drying and cooling the crystals. We can understand that the manufacturing of

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requires

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complicated

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with several steps involved.