The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This

report derives from the flow chart which enumerates the

process

of manufacturing

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Furthermore

, the illustration includes the seven long steps

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the

process

.

Overall

, the knotty procedure is progressed by equipped farmers and specific machines.

Firstly

, it takes around twelve to eighteen months to grow a

sugar

cane. It is

then

harvested by the farmers

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underwent

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the crushing phase by machinery and

turned

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into juice form.

Secondly

, a different device, a limestone filter, is used to

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the juice.

Also

, the purified juice will become

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syrup

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the syrup

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after the evaporating

process

. And

this

is done by a big evaporator with a high temperature.

Lastly

, the syrup is sorted

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sugar

crystals by an equipment called centrifuge.

Finally

, we can get a complete form of

sugar

after drying and cooling the crystals. We can understand that the manufacturing of

sugar

requires

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complicated

process

with several steps involved.