The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The given map depicts data about the changes made in the
touristic
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territory.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that there are a plethora of renovations which are done after
and
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many areas are replaced by one another. Well,the variations are described below.
To begin
,the beach is surrounded by swimming and many
accomadations
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accommodations
are replaced on the island.For relaxing and entertaining the restaurant is built and reception is attached to the restaurant with
vehicle
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track.
Additionaly
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Additionally
,the pier is linked to the island and boats are given
to use
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for
tourist
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tourists
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the reasons of seeing the scenery and
observing
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the island. Looking at more
detailly
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,it is readily apparent that there
are
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a lot of
footpath
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footpaths
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around
accomadations
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accommodations
accommodation
.The most striking feature of
this
area,if there were many trees after they
are
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not
also
changed,they
are
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not destroyed .So,the place now is more available
for
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being
touristic
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zone for ecological reasons.
Furhemore
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Furthermore
,the second sea is vanished and replaced with
pier
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and boats.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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