The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
The given map depicts data about the changes made in the
touristic
territory.
Replace the word
tourist
Overall
, it is crystal clear that there are a plethora of renovations which are done after and
many areas are replaced by one another. Well,the variations are described below.
Correct word choice
apply
To begin
,the beach is surrounded by swimming and many accomadations
are replaced on the island.For relaxing and entertaining the restaurant is built and reception is attached to the restaurant with Correct your spelling
accommodations
vehicle
track.Add an article
a vehicle
Additionaly
,the pier is linked to the island and boats are given Correct your spelling
Additionally
to use
for Verb problem
apply
tourist
the reasons of seeing the scenery and Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
observing
the island.
Looking at more Wrong verb form
observe
detailly
,it is readily apparent that there Correct your spelling
detail
are
a lot of Change the verb form
is
footpath
around Fix the agreement mistake
footpaths
accomadations
.The most striking feature of Correct your spelling
accommodations
accommodation
this
area,if there were many trees after they are
not Wrong verb form
were
also
changed,they are
not destroyed .So,the place now is more available Wrong verb form
were
for
being Change preposition
as
touristic
zone for ecological reasons.Replace the word
tourist
Furhemore
,the second sea is vanished and replaced with Correct your spelling
Furthermore
pier
and boats.Fix the agreement mistake
piers
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