The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the difference in
divorce
rates
between two European countries from 2011 to 2015.
Overall
, the divorce
rates
in Sweden
declined steadily throughout the years but fluctuated in Finland
. Despite this
, it is clear that
Sweden
has higher divorce
rates
compared to Finland
.
The percentage of separated couples in Sweden
started at around 40% in 2011, which slightly rose in 2012. In 2013, the divorce
rates
had a slight reduction before returning to the 2011 level of percentage in 2014. The Swedish divorce
rates
reached an all-time low in 2015.
Finland
started with a lower portion of divorce
rates
in 2011 with a percentage below 40%. After a minor decrease in 2012, the separation rates
in Finland
rose slightly in 2013 and 2014. In 2015, the graph shows that the separation rates
were similar to the year before. 2015 was the only year where Finland
's level of divorce
exceeded Sweden
's rate of divorces
.Fix the agreement mistake
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