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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the holiday Explain that you left your wallet in their house Give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Selina, I’m so grateful that you gave me
chance
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a chance
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 to meet your family and spend
such
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 a wonderful holiday together. I’m writing to let you know that after returning home I realized that I left my purse at your
house
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 and would appreciate it if you could help me to get it back. I’d like to thank
to
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you for your warm welcome in your
house
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. After completing my graduation, I was thinking
to go
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of going
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 for a holiday, and your invitation for a short vacation was exactly what I needed. You made my break very special and memorable. I can’t express my gratitude enough . Before leaving your
house
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, I went to meet your grandmother
into
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in
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 her room with my wallet. I think I left it somewhere in there. On top of it, my purse is
a
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small in size and it has a purple flower on it. In
few
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a few
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 days, I’ll be coming to the Edge hair salon which is twenty minutes away from your
house
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. If you can drop my wallet
to
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at
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this
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 shop,
I’d
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it’d
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 be a great help for me. It will be great to catch up again soon. Give my best to everyone in the family. Best wishes, Heena

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coherence
Consider breaking up longer sentences to improve readability.
coherence
Review for minor grammatical errors and punctuation usage to ensure clarity.
greeting closing
Clear and appropriate introductory and closing statements.
single idea paragraph
Each paragraph presents a distinct idea or aspect, contributing to overall clarity.
writing tone
Tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend, enhancing engagement.
task achievement
Addresses all parts of the task with sufficient detail.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • memorable
  • grateful
  • remarkable
  • incident
  • essential
  • postage
  • courier
  • identification
  • reimburse
  • parcel
  • delivery method
  • anticipate
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