You bought a new camera, but when you got it home, you noticed that it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke with the company representative a week ago, but the camera still hasn't been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: .Introduce yourself .Explain the situation .Tell us how you want the company to act
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a researcher myself. I
therefore
needed a new and quality camera
. I always go to the forest to photograph strange birds, strange plants and rare animals. I had an old camera
but it fell and broke when I was shooting an animal. I needed a new camera
. My friends recommended this
company's product. I agreed to it. I bought him the latest fashion camera
. It was recently produced. The employees there told me that it was produced only three days ago. And I bought that camera
.
I bought it and brought it home. When I opened it, it was broken into several pieces. I thought it was normal. But it turned out more pieces than I thought. I read the manual but it's still more chunky than the manual. When I found out later, I thought that they brought me a broken camera
. But as far as I know, the camera
broke on the way. I then
returned it to the company for repair. But they still haven't fixed my camera
.
I hope they fix my camera
soon. I hope to donate my money or a new camera
.
Yourth
faithfully,
Arslonov JasurCorrect your spelling
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Avoid repeating ideas, such as mentioning multiple times that the camera was broken.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve overall clarity.
task achievement
Use a more formal tone throughout the letter to match the formal context of a complaint to a company.
task achievement
The letter clearly outlines the situation and the action you desire from the company, which is crucial for task achievement.
coherence cohesion
You have included a proper greeting and closing, enhancing the formality and structure of the letter.