You bought a new camera, but when you got it home, you noticed that it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke with the company representative a week ago, but the camera still hasn't been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: .Introduce yourself .Explain the situation .Tell us how you want the company to act

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a researcher myself. I

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needed a new and quality

camera

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. I always go to the forest to photograph strange birds, strange plants and rare animals. I had an old

camera

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but it fell and broke when I was shooting an animal. I needed a new

camera

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. My friends recommended

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company's product. I agreed to it. I bought him the latest fashion

camera

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. It was recently produced. The employees there told me that it was produced only three days ago. And I bought that

camera

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. I bought it and brought it home. When I opened it, it was broken into several pieces. I thought it was normal. But it turned out more pieces than I thought. I read the manual but it's still more chunky than the manual. When I found out later, I thought that they brought me a broken

camera

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. But as far as I know, the

camera

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broke on the way. I

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returned it to the company for repair. But they still haven't fixed my

camera

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. I hope they fix my

camera

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soon. I hope to donate my money or a new

camera

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Yourth

Correct your spelling

Yours

faithfully, Arslonov Jasur

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coherence cohesion

Avoid repeating ideas, such as mentioning multiple times that the camera was broken.

coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to improve overall clarity.

task achievement

Use a more formal tone throughout the letter to match the formal context of a complaint to a company.

task achievement

The letter clearly outlines the situation and the action you desire from the company, which is crucial for task achievement.

coherence cohesion

You have included a proper greeting and closing, enhancing the formality and structure of the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

198 words

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