The car is possibly the most convenient and popular way of getting from A to B. However, due to its impact on environment and the risk it poses to pedestrians and motorists, government should take urgent steps to reduce our dependency on this mode of transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Automobile-like cars are the most convenient way to reach your destination but

this

advancement

also

has a bad impact on the environment

as well as

shows risk to

pedestrians

and

motorists

.

Therefore

,

this

essay totally agrees that the

government

should implement policies in which people use more public

transport

which prevent huge strain on the environment and

also

more strict guidelines should be followed by each driver for

motorists

' and

pedestrians

' safety on the

road

. Countries in North America and Europe have a Western lifestyle .

This

is to say that their lifestyle involves consuming lots of natural resources for their

transport

.

This

results in a huge amount of energy being consumed in the form of petrol in cars and coal and gas in electrical power stations. Many have become so used to

this

type of luxury that it is very difficult for them to contemplate a life without modern conveniences.

Thus

,the

government

should increase public

transport

in the cities so that people are more likely to prefer

this

mode of commuting and it would

also

help to reduce carbon footprints .

For example

, the

government

has increased the public mode of

transport

in Canada and people are more likely to travel in buses

as well as

on trains. Another reason that the

government

should take steps to reduce dependency on these automobiles is for the safety of

pedestrians

and

motorists

. Most of the drivers do not follow rules on the

road

while

driving and

this

causes accidents on the

road

. It happens multiple times

due to

high traffic on the

road

,all the drivers are impatient to

go

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to their destination

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often they do not see pedestrian comes

to

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cross

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the

road

and in many cases ,Car drivers do not give enough space to

motorists

,

therefore

accidents happen .

For example

, in Canada ,

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huge traffic congestion happens in the peak hours

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some vehicles drive so fast on the

road

that they are hardly able to stop when the red light blinks.

Thus

, the

government

should implement new policies for the safety of citizens on the

road

. In conclusion, men and women depend on cars rather than

another mode

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other modes

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of

transport

and

this

feels unsafe to

motorists

and

pedestrians

. It

also

shows the effect on the environment as well . It would be reduced if

Western

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the Western

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lifestyle

adapts

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public modes of

transport

and strict

guid

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guide