The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should  Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money which was being spent by several
countries
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in 2014 for travelling. China was the country with the biggest expense for travelling in 2014, their spending for these kinds of activities was worth about $150 billion. Fascinatingly, in the second position of its standing, the United States and Germany were spending $82 billion each for travelling. The United Kingdom was in the third position because they were spending only nearly $57 million on travel.
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, Taiwan only spent approximately $10 billion on travelling which put them in the
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position among other
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. The Malaysian appeared in the country that had the second lowest expenses for travelling above Taiwan; even though they had spent about $15 million for it. In conclusion, these
countries
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had differences in how they used their money for travelling, but the United States and Germany had a similar number for travel expenses. The biggest expenses appeared in China;
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, Taiwan was the country with the smallest spending on travel compared to other
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