You are going to organise a birthday party next week at your home. You want to invite a friend to this party. Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to attend the party. In your letter, • explain why you are organising the party • describe what you are planning to do • say why you want your friend to come to the party

Dear Anna, How are you?
Hope
this
letter reaches you in good health and spirit. My life, of course, is going as usual. I know you do not really like attending any kind of
party
, but I still took the liberty to invite you. The purpose of inviting you is that today is my little sister's birthday.
Also
, I invite our other friends to the
party
too. My family has decided to organize
this
party
in order to congratulate my little sister. At the
party
, we have a lot of fun and we chill out. There are special birthday cakes, traditional dishes and light music at the
party
.
In addition
to
this
, we have a karaoke room. If you come to the
party
we sing our favourite songs in the karaoke room. The
party
is going to be held on 21st July and I would very much like you to join our
party
since
this
is going to allow you an opportunity to recuperate from the boredom of some tough engineering lessons and mid-term examinations. You know, you are my close, best friend and we have been besties for seven years. I
hope
my invitation will received. I
hope
you will visit us soon as I am really looking forward to having you. It will be fun.
Hope
to meet you soon. Warm regards, Lola
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task achievement
Consider providing a bit more detail on specific activities planned for the party to fully engage the reader.
coherence
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to enhance clarity.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is very friendly and inviting, which is appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are very warm and genuine, creating a strong personal connection.
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