your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, say why a driving license is advantageous. Recommend a driving school. Give any extra tips.
Dear Sarah,
It was great to hear from you. I hope you are doing well and amazing.
However
, this
decision will change your life completely. In a good way, of course. First of all, getting a driving license has many advantages. Therefore
, I encourage you to learn how to drive a car. Nowadays, the level of insecurity is increasing, especially for women. Your workplace is far away from your house. Because of that, it is difficult and scary for you to walk or take a taxi such
as Uber or use another app to take you home. Another point to consider, these delivery apps are getting more expensive. So, in my opinion, if you decide to learn to drive and buy your own car, you will feel safer than before and you will be able to save a lot of money too. I recommend Al Saeed School and King Abdulaziz University Driving School. These two options are the best for learning to drive. In addition
to more tips, I would like to say, learn and do not be afraid. This
will change your life in a positive direction. So, keep going.
with love and regards,
Ahad Saud.Submitted by ahadaloufi3a on
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coherence cohesion
To improve the logical structure, consider separating different aspects of your advice into distinct paragraphs. For instance, one paragraph could discuss the safety and financial benefits of getting a driving license, and another paragraph could recommend driving schools and offer additional tips.
coherence cohesion
Be mindful of repetitive phrases or structures. For example, instead of saying 'learn to drive a car' and 'learn to drive' separately, you might merge these points to avoid redundancy.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are well-constructed and convey a friendly, supportive tone.
complete response
Your letter provides a comprehensive response to the task with clear, persuasive reasons for getting a driving license and valuable recommendations.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.