The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph shows
as
the production of Change preposition
apply
honey
by Use synonyms
bees
.
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Overall
, is a natural, linear process that Linking Words
have
7 steps, starting with Change the verb form
has
bees
building the hives and, Use synonyms
ends
up with the Wrong verb form
ending
honey
collected in a jar for Use synonyms
store
and consumption.
The process begins when the Replace the word
storage
bees
start to prepare the hives with their Use synonyms
cells
to live and work in the production of Use synonyms
honey
. Use synonyms
Next,
the Linking Words
bees
fly following flowers in order to pollinate and to suck the nectar from the flower. After that the Use synonyms
bees
bring back the nectar to the hives and they fill all the Use synonyms
cells
with it.
Once the Use synonyms
bees
fill all the Use synonyms
cells
with the flower’s liquid, it needs to be cooled, so that the Use synonyms
bees
Use synonyms
flaps
their winds to produce air. Following that, Change the verb form
flap
due to
the amount of air in the cell, there is a water evaporation, to become the nectar dense. The process finished with the Linking Words
honey
separated from the Use synonyms
cells
and collected in a jar for consumption.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bees, cells with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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