The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph shows
as
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the production of
honey
by
bees
.
Overall
, is a natural, linear process that
have
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7 steps, starting with
bees
building the hives and,
ends
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up with the
honey
collected in a jar for
store
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and consumption. The process begins when the
bees
start to prepare the hives with their
cells
to live and work in the production of
honey
.
Next,
the
bees
fly following flowers in order to pollinate and to suck the nectar from the flower. After that the
bees
bring back the nectar to the hives and they fill all the
cells
with it. Once the
bees
fill all the
cells
with the flower’s liquid, it needs to be cooled, so that the
bees
flaps
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their winds to produce air. Following that,
due to
the amount of air in the cell, there is a water evaporation, to become the nectar dense. The process finished with the
honey
separated from the
cells
and collected in a jar for consumption.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bees, cells with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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