The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph shows
as
the production of Change preposition
apply
honey
by bees
.
Overall
, is a natural, linear process that have
7 steps, starting with Change the verb form
has
bees
building the hives and, ends
up with the Wrong verb form
ending
honey
collected in a jar for store
and consumption.
The process begins when the Replace the word
storage
bees
start to prepare the hives with their cells
to live and work in the production of honey
. Next,
the bees
fly following flowers in order to pollinate and to suck the nectar from the flower. After that the bees
bring back the nectar to the hives and they fill all the cells
with it.
Once the bees
fill all the cells
with the flower’s liquid, it needs to be cooled, so that the bees
flaps
their winds to produce air. Following that, Change the verb form
flap
due to
the amount of air in the cell, there is a water evaporation, to become the nectar dense. The process finished with the honey
separated from the cells
and collected in a jar for consumption.Submitted by daniruspi on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bees, cells with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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