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The maps below show the changes of a community center in 10 years time.

The maps below show the changes of a community center in 10 years time.
The provided maps of the
community
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center
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centre
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 10 years ago and after different repositions in the present time.
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, it can be clearly seen that the
centre
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 has undergone an overwhelming change over the period of time given. With regards to the facilities provided a decade ago, the entrance was through reception at the southern
side
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, immediately next to which was a cloakroom. On the opposite
side
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 of reception could be found a coffee bar and toilets. At the heart of the
community
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centre
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 10 years ago there was a huge hall with 100 seats. Immediately next to the hall, there was a storage room. On the western
side
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, there was a garden with a multitude of plants and a car park. The northeast
side
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 included four buildings of offices, with storage underneath it.
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, there
could
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 be
found
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apply
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a kitchen on the southeast
side
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 of the ancient
community
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centre
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. Versatile and multifaceted changes and transformations occurred since the old appearance of the
community
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centre
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. The most notable change is the
area
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 for sports activities on the northwest
side
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 of the
area
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, mostly for indoor activities. Car par, which is located underneath
this
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 building remained unchanged. Toilet superseded the north
area
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 of the
community
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centre
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, immediately next to the storage room, and huge hall below. Four offices were altered, the kitchen location plateaued, and a café
area
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 was added above.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words community, centre, side, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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