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A friend of yours is coming to stay at your house for a week while you are away on holiday. They have not stayed at your house before. Write a letter to your friend so that you can prepare them for their stay. In your letter: Remind him/her about your holiday dates Tell him/her what tasks need to be done in your house Explain what he/she can do during the day in your town

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Dear David, I am writing
this
 letter to express my interest in your
traveling
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 to my home. I have to inform you that I will be on holiday for the next week.
Therefore
, it would be a great idea if we rescheduled your trip.
To begin
 with, I would like to announce to you that my plan will be started on Saturday until Friday. I am willing to clarify that it will be the 21st of October until the 27th of
this
 month. Unfortunately, I do not have a spacious apartment.
Thus
, it would be better to inform me in advance as I have to prepare an extra bed for you.
Also
, it is necessary to coordinate with my landlord since he is sensitive about strangers. I am willing to notify you that you will be able to visit a historical castle
that is
 located close to my hometown.
Additionally
, you can spend your spare time at traditional restaurants that have delicious food. I am eagerly looking forward to hearing your response. Best Regards, Ali
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task achievement
Try to provide clearer instructions on the tasks that need to be done in the house during your absence.
coherence cohesion
Consider organizing the content better by separating different ideas and making your instructions more detailed.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
You have effectively used a greeting and closing in the letter, making it polite and complete.
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