The follawing bar charts shows the different modes transport used to travel to and from work in one Europian city in 1960 , 1980 and 2000

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The bar chart provides key information about various means of transportation used by a population. of a European city in three different periods.The units are measured in

perecentage

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percentage

percentages

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, it is clear from the graph that cars by far are the most

favorable

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mode of moving with the opposite of

this

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being true for bikes.

According to

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what is shown,In 1960 people preferred to navigate the city on their foot with

high

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percentage of nearly 35%. After that,

bike

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bikes

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and buses were used just about 25 % and 20%, respectively, The least used way of travelling was

car

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a car

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with about 5%. In terms of moving methods in 1980,

Bus

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the Bus

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was the highest ranking to be used by travellers and

then

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came

car

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the car

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which was just under that at

ulmost

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most

25 %. Foot and bike were the least with 20% and 15%

resectively

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respectively

. As far as 2000 is concerned, car was the highest ranking

whereas

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bike was the least. Bus and foot were used around 10% and 15 %.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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The follawing bar charts shows the different modes transport used to travel to and from work in one Europian city in 1960 , 1980 and 2000

Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause stress, and how can we reduce it?

Some people believe that it is better to stay with one company during a career. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view?

Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?