The diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chain in the centre of the Pacific Ocean. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below gives the information about the Hawaiian island chain in the centre of the Pacific Ocean. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown. Write at least 150 words.
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The provided diagram depicts information about the islands of Hawaii, which are located in the middle of the Pacific Ocean.
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, there are eight major islands in the Hawaiian chain, and the oldest one dates back to 80 million years,
while
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the most recent are developing from numerous eruptions. The tectonic plates change their location slightly every year, causing a movement in the Pacific Ocean.
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the data, the eruption process starts deep under the Pacific plate, beginning 2883 kilometres down. The magma moves upwards, resulting in an eruption, which builds up to later develop a new volcano, which will create the base of another island. Turning to the remaining data, the tectonic plates, which are placed on a solid dense rock, are slowly shifting, causing a movement of 7 to 9 centimetres yearly. Because of these processes, various islands have been created, including a relatively large one like Hawaii and small ones like Kahoolaw and Niihau.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geographical position
  • Pacific Ocean
  • diagram
  • volcanic activity
  • hot spot theory
  • tectonic plate
  • stationary
  • Earth's mantle
  • sequential
  • evolution
  • active volcanism
  • erosion
  • subsidence
  • atolls
  • seamounts
  • topography
  • ecological development
  • significant
  • historical
  • cultural importance
  • ongoing natural processes
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