The graph below shows how much waste is collected and recycled in the US

The graph below shows how much waste is collected and recycled in the US
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows how much waste is collected and recycled in the US
The presented line graph
illustrate
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the annual wastage
collection
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and the portion of the
collection
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from 1960 to 2005 in The United
State
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States
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.
It is clear that
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,
thoughout
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throughout
the given period, there is an increment in both activities. In 1990's was a significant year for both
collection
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and re-processing since, in that period, there was a rapid
felt down
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in wasting and quick
grow
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in the recycling process. In
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the 1990's
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1990's
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1990s
reported
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the highest wasting quantity which was more than 30 million tons
by
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yearly
while
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approximately 25% of re-generation was presented. From 1995, the gap between the both adding and re-making
process
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was
got
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enhance
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.
In addition
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to that, by
tha
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that
year two tasks were shown sightly increase
upto
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up to
2005. Meanwhile,
in
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the end of 1980 to
middle
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of 1990 was highlighted
due to
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the fact of surpassing the annual garbage
collection
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by re-processing portion. In that constant time frame shown the biggest re-cycling rate which was nearly equal to 40%. Total wastage recovery is increased by gradually
upto
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up to
80 million for a year
while
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re-processing of wastage
is
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steadily
rise
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rises
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till
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to
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40%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words collection with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • amount
  • notable
  • increase
  • decrease
  • analyze
  • emphasize
  • stagnated
  • compare
  • contrast
  • relationship
  • apparent
  • variables
  • overview
  • highlight
  • efforts
  • insights
  • implications
  • observed
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