The diagram below shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate Central
Library
's floor plan from 20 years ago and in present.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that some contemporary items have been added to the
library
's floor and just the
library
's entrance
is still remains
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still remains
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. To closer look, in the middle of the
library
, tables and chairs were removed. 20 years ago, the southern east corner had a children's books section, nowadays
this
room
is changed into a lecture
room
. In the southern-west corner, there was a technology
room
but now
this
room
is located in the western north section of the
library
. Nowadays
this
room
using
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is used
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for
stoytelling
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storytelling
events for children. 2 decades ago, books were separated into adult fiction and non-adult fiction,
however
in present, the left side is divided
for
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into
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adult fiction books and they
are added
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have added
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some information
desk
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desks
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and self-service machines.
Finally
, the eastern north corner of the
library
was utilised for the enquiry desk but it was removed and a cafe was added.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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