The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinge upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary era, the usage of social

media

has become a common trend among

people

.

People

often hold varied views about the internet both in its favour and opposition. In my opinion, the utilization of social

media

can prove worthwhile but only if there is a wall between private and public life. On the one hand, proponents claim that these days interaction with others on social

media

is a must. As in some parts of the world, making vlogs of their daily life is in demand.

This

is

due to

the active income as posting informative videos or photos on online platforms helps to make good income on a monthly basis which not only helps individuals in their financial growth but

also

helps to build a social status.

On the other hand

, as per opponents believe that internet sites break the privacy of

people

. With the increase in cybercrime, filling out personal information or posting any video publicly leads to excessive attacks of robbery.

To sum up

, no doubt using social

media

is commendable these days as it helps in the social and financial growth of

people

but it is only useful if the usage of these sites

are

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limited or the privacy of one is encrypted.