You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. Your local museum has asked for feedback on your recent visit. Write to the museum. In your letter •Tell them what you liked and what you didn’t like •Make some suggestions for improvement •Describe some other exhibits you would like to see You do NOT need to write any addresses.
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Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you in the best of spirits and radiant health. I am writing Linking Words
this
letter to share my feedback on my recent visit to Linking Words
local
museum.
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To begin
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firstly
, I liked a few new sections that Linking Words
are
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were
showed
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that showed
Secondly
, the light and sound Linking Words
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shown
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in
archeological
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archaeological
also
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However
, there were some issues Linking Words
also
, first and foremost, Linking Words
ticket
counter operates for a short time, Correct article usage
the ticket
due to
which in order to, get tickets people arrived very early and there was a long Linking Words
que
outside the museum. Correct your spelling
queue
Lastly
, there was no provision Linking Words
of
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for
refreshment
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refreshments
as a result
, we had to leave our tour in between to buy some eatables from outside.
In order to attract more visitors, you can prolong the ticket obtaining times, so that more people Linking Words
could
enjoy the trip. Adding more to it, you can open a few food outlets on every floor, which would Wrong verb form
can
facilitate
people to buy food from inside the museum only.
In the end, I would urge you that on public demand, it would be great if you Verb problem
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freedom
struggle of India. Correct article usage
the freedom
This
will not only attract more visitors but it will Linking Words
also
motivate the young ones to become ideal citizens.
I hope my reviews are helpful and I am looking forward to hearing from you as well.
Yours faithfully,
Jatinder.Linking Words
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task achievement
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coherence cohesion
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task achievement
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The Greeting
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Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.