You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you decided to move to a different city Describe the new city and accommodation Ask your friend to arrange a visit You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Hamza, I am writing to let you know that I have recently relocated to another town.

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as you know, I am a freelancer, and I am working with different clients, so the city where I was living before was so small and far from all the big cities which contain big companies and so on . Actually,

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is the reason why I chose to be near the new town that will give me all the opportunities to find a better job there.

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the new city is called CasaBlanca, it is well-known for its landmarks, like the big tower and the huge Mall,

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there is a beach. You will find all the places that you desire to visit. So I rented a small Studio in front of the beach with an amazing view of the garden and sea, which has one bedroom, a small kitchen and a living room where you can stay and enjoy your meal.

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, I will be happy if you can visit me in the future , in order to share better moments together, and I will show you all the places here in the city. There are so many restaurants and cafes near the beach where you can spend a calm moment. I look forward to seeing you soon, Best wishes, Issam Chris,

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Sep 15, 2025

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Structure

Keep one idea in each paragraph and use a clear link to the next idea.

Language

Check small errors in grammar and word choice to sound more clear.

Tone

Make the close a little more warm to sound friendly.

Content

The reason for moving is clear.

Content

You tell how the new home looks and how you can meet your friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

222 words

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You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you decided to move to a different city Describe the new city and accommodation Ask your friend to arrange a visit You do NOT need to write any addresses.

People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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