The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line chart illustrates the
number
of inquiries sent to the Tourist Information Office in a particular city via three means of communication, between January and Use synonyms
June
in 2011.
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It is clear that
visitors to the city made more inquiries in Linking Words
person
and via Use synonyms
telephone
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while
written letters and Linking Words
emails
became the least common choices. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
enquiries
in Use synonyms
person
experienced the most dramatic change among the different options.
In January, the Tourist Information Office received 900 Use synonyms
telephone
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enquiries
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while
just under 800 letters and Linking Words
emails
were received. Not many tourists chose to ask for information in Use synonyms
person
, with just over 400 queries. Over the next three months, the Use synonyms
telephone
still remained the most popular method of enquiry, with approximately 1000 queries.
Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
enquiries
made in Use synonyms
person
saw considerable growth to 800, surpassing the figures for Use synonyms
emails
and postal Use synonyms
enquiries
. From March to Use synonyms
June
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enquiries
in Use synonyms
person
were the most common method of inquiry. By Use synonyms
June
, the Use synonyms
number
of in-Use synonyms
person
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enquiries
soared by more than 1,000 to peak at 1,900. During Use synonyms
this
period, there was Linking Words
also
a significant rise in the figure for Linking Words
telephone
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enquiries
, from 1000 to 1600. Use synonyms
By contrast
, fewer people sent Linking Words
emails
or letters to make enquires, with slightly less than 400 enquires in May and Use synonyms
June
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