The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter ·say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party ·explain why you won't be able to attend the party ·give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time

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Hello, dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith. I was so excited to receive your letter, and I hope that my letter finds you fine. First of all, let me express my sincere admiration for your idea - I am convinced that Chris will be the happiest guy in the world with the pilot party, which you are planning. I know, it was his most long-standing dream - to be a pilot, ever for one hour. He will be really delighted, trust me.

Secondly

, I apologize. Unfortunately, I haven't had an option to participate in

this

party, it falls into my exam period at the universities, and we do have not an opportunity to expend or convey

this

period. But I have another idea. I'm planning a journey to New Zealand

this

summer vacation, and I wanted to invite Chris to connect with me. It will be the greatest camping journey, we'll have plenty of time to talk, hike, and enjoy

this

beautiful country. Looking forward to seeing you, best regards. Anastassia.

Submitted by anastasia on Mon Aug 26 2024

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coherence cohesion

To achieve higher scores, aim to add clearer transitions between different ideas. This will help improve the logical structure of your letter.

task achievement

Consider revising the sentence, 'unfortunately, I haven't had an option to participate in this party.' A more natural phrasing might be, 'Unfortunately, I won't be able to attend the party.'

greeting and closing

The greeting and closing of your letter are appropriate and add a personal touch, which is excellent.

suitable writing tone

The writing tone is very suitable for this type of letter, making it warm and friendly.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

170 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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