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The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.

The table below show the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.
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The table illustrates
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the comparative
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 amount of Ashdown
Musuem
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Museum
visitors
postrefurbish
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post-refurbish
post refurbish
 and
prerefurbish
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refurbish
. Correspondingly,the pie charts portray the amusement of these
visitors
.
Overall
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 been a remarkable increase in the number of
visitors
, reflecting the development of the museum's facilities.
Additionally
, the
statics
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statistics
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 demonstrate a significant growth in the rates of satisfied tourists after refurbishment.
In contrast
,
dissatisfied
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 experienced a noticeable
drop.no
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remained
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and remained
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 constant within the given period. In detail, 12 thousand more people visited the Ashdown Museum after refurbishment reaching 92000
visitors
. The museum succeeded in attracting
visitors
 and satisfying them, where the very
satisfied
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 rates were more than doubled, which jumped from 15% to 35%.
Conversely
, satisfied percentages were
halfed
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halved
, dropping to 5% in the year after refurbishment.
Moreover
,
satisfied
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 exhibited a 10% growth, as it started
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at
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 30% and ended up
with40
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with 40
%. In terms of dissatisfaction, there was a dramatic fall, from 40% to 15%. It can be clearly seen that there was no change in
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response, which remained stable at 5%, generating the least proportion.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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