the chart below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in householdsin one country between 1920 and 2019.
The presented charts illustrate the proportion of households with electrical appliances and
also
the number of hours of housework per week in a country between 1920 and 2019.
It is clearly seen that the percentage of households in all 3 categories had been
increased , Unnecessary verb
apply
while
the number of hours had a downward trend (negarive
pattern).
As can be seen, the washing machine Correct your spelling
negative
was
contributed around zero Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
at Change the spelling
per cent
first,
then
it had a
significant growth and reached 100% in 1980 and Remove the article
apply
remaind
the same Correct your spelling
remained
untill
2019. Correct your spelling
until
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the Add a comma
Meanwhile,
refrigrator
was 40% in 1920 , it rose to 70% in 1960 and after a minimal Correct your spelling
refrigerator
declinein
1980, reached around 75% in 2019. The Correct your spelling
decline in
vaccum
cleaner was 30% at Correct your spelling
vacuum
first,
then
it rose sharply and reached 100% in 2000 and remained the same until 2019.
According to
the second figure, the number of hours of house
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housework
workwas
50 per week in 1920then it Correct your spelling
was
dramaticly
decreased and reached about 35 and 20 in 1940 and 1960, respectively, Correct your spelling
dramatically
then
it declined slightly and reached almost 10 in 2019.Submitted by ghazal.seyedi95 on
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