The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph illustrates the data about the
number
of shop
closures and the new shop
establishment from 2011 to 2018.
In general, both categories had a downward trend during seven years. However
, the number
of new shops
opened was a more noticeable decrease. Besides
, the closed shops
had a more significant low, except in 2015 the amount shops
decreased sharply.
Regarding the stores that closed, there were nearly 6500 cases
recorded in 2011. For the third consecutive year
, the number
of stores oscillated from under 6000 to more than 7000 cases
before they dipped in 2015 with approximately 500 at the bottom. Rising back up in the following year
, the figures tenfold the year
before went up to 5000 cases
. Then
, the number
of shops
remained stable in the next year
.
In another aspect, the figures for shop
openings started with a peak in 2011, with over 8500 cases
before they fell dramatically in the next year
. The line of shop
opening shows the lowest point by more than 50% with relatively 4000 cases
. In the second continuous year
, the number
of shops
rebounded and reached the second peak, over
6000 Change preposition
with over
cases
in 2014. This
data then
dropped to the 2012 level and levelling off until 2017 before fluctuating in 2018 to around 3000 cases
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