The chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban areas in three countries and predictions for future years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the shift of
people
from rural to urban areas in three unknown countries between Use synonyms
Use synonyms
years
2000 and 2025. Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
in those countries constantly Use synonyms
increase
from time to time.
In 2000, Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
Country
A started Use synonyms
at
18 Change preposition
with
million
Use synonyms
people
who moved. Use synonyms
Then
, in 2005, the Linking Words
number
steadily up to around 36 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
people
. After that, in 2010, there Use synonyms
are
41 Wrong verb form
were
million
Use synonyms
people
who moved to cities. In predictions, the Use synonyms
number
will Use synonyms
remainly
rise Correct your spelling
remain
until
2025. Change preposition
by
Besides
that, there is a Linking Words
Country
B. In 2000, from Use synonyms
years
2000 to 2020, the Use synonyms
number
was significantly rose. Begin with 10 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
people
to 30 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
will remain steadily in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
years
2020 until 2025.
Correct article usage
the years
Last
Linking Words
country
, Use synonyms
initially
, Linking Words
Country
C was the lowest with only about 5 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
people
who shifted. Even, in 2005, the Use synonyms
number
Use synonyms
still
below 20 Add a missing verb
was still
million
Use synonyms
people
. But, suddenly Use synonyms
climb
and the Wrong verb form
climbed
number
Use synonyms
become
bigger and bigger. Wrong verb form
became
Moreover
, the prediction for future Linking Words
years
, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
who are moving to cities in Use synonyms
Country
C will more Use synonyms
large
than two other countries.Correct word choice
larger
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, years, number, country, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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