The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the
amount
of five types of vegetables exported to Qatar in the period from 1980 to 2020. parameters measured in tonnes
.
Overall
, spinach was the most consumed vegetable among all five types in Qatar throughout the given period , while
peas consumption was the lowest.
Firstly
, figures
Correct article usage
the figures
of
spinach showed a downward trend, Change preposition
for
initially
, almost 500 tonnes
were exported in 1980, afterforward
, the export Correct your spelling
afterwards
after forward
amount
decreased gradually to almost 420 tonnes
in 1990 and stayed stable untill
2000, when it continued to slope until reaching nearly 380 Correct your spelling
until
tonnes
at the end
.
Secondly
, garlic and broccoli both exhibited an upword
trend. From Correct your spelling
upward
1980to
2000, broccoli Correct your spelling
1980 to
amount
was nearly stable at around 200 tonnes
, while
garlic showed an increase from almost 300 tonnes
to 380 tonnes
, in 1980 and 2000 respectively. Both garlic and broccoli amounts continued to increase until reached the highest amount
in 2020 at 300 and 400 tonnes
respectively.
Lastely
, peas maintained nearly a constant level from the start of the period to the end.Correct your spelling
Lastly
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