The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph describes the
number
of questions received by the Tourist Information Office in one city from January to
June
2011.
Overall
, there are some changing trends over a six-month period.
While
in-person visits and telephone calls experienced significant growth, letters and emails dropped every month. In detail, in-person visit inquiries started at the lowest
number
of 400, compared with telephone calls and letters or emails, but
then
the
number
increased by 200 in February and
March
. From April to May, they even doubled by 400, making it the highest
number
of 1600 in
June
2011. Inquiries received by letter or email begin moderately at 700 in January and remain stable until
March
before they begin to decrease significantly by 200 start from
March
until May, and
then
stay at the same
number
, more or less 375 in May and
June
. As for inquiries by telephone calls,
although
starting with the highest
number
of 900, they declined moderately in February by 200,
then
slightly rose in
March
, stable until April, before increasing remarkably in May at 1,400,
then
grew moderately at 1,600 in
June
.
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