The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children’s charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children’s charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two pie charts illustrate in percentage the different
revenue
sources
and
expenditures
of a children's charity in the USA for a period of one
year
. Among the six
revenue
sources
, donated food constituted the majority with 86.6% of the total
revenue
while
Program Services eclipsed all the
expenditures
constituting 95.8% of the entire expenditure for the
year
. Notably, Donated Food and Community Contributions, the first two major
revenue
sources
combined amounted to 97% of the total generated
revenue
of 53,561,580 dollars for the
year
. The rest of the
revenue
sources
accounted for less than 5% of the total. Program Services, with 95.8% of the total expenditure, dwarfed the rest by a huge margin. Of the 53,224,896 dollars of expenditure for the period, all other
expenditures
combined except Program Services constituted less than 5% of the total. For the
year
, there was a surplus of more than 200,000 dollars in
revenue
against the
expenditures
.
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