The pie charts show the revenue sources and expenditures of a children’s charity in the USA in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The two pie charts illustrate in percentage the different
revenue
sources
and expenditures
of a children's charity in the USA for a period of one year
.
Among the six revenue
sources
, donated food constituted the majority with 86.6% of the total revenue
while
Program Services eclipsed all the expenditures
constituting 95.8% of the entire expenditure for the year
.
Notably, Donated Food and Community Contributions, the first two major revenue
sources
combined amounted to 97% of the total generated revenue
of 53,561,580 dollars for the year
. The rest of the revenue
sources
accounted for less than 5% of the total.
Program Services, with 95.8% of the total expenditure, dwarfed the rest by a huge margin. Of the 53,224,896 dollars of expenditure for the period, all other expenditures
combined except Program Services constituted less than 5% of the total. For the year
, there was a surplus of more than 200,000 dollars in revenue
against the expenditures
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