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The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by 4 types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.

The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by 4 types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
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The bar chart provides information about the number of
people
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 in urban and rural areas who were affected by
noise
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in
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day
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 and
night
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 in the year 2007.
Traffic
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,
train
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, aircraft and industry were the four main types of
noise
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 pollutants.
It is clear that
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 most of the
people
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 in cities and
countryside
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the countryside
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 were suffering from
traffic
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 for the whole
day
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.
FIrst
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First
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 of all, the majority of the citizens were affected by the
traffic
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noise
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day
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 and
night
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. Roughly 60
million
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people
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 in
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day
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a day
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 and 48
million
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people
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 at
night
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 time were suffering. Despite a big difference in the number of
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people
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people,
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 it was followed by
train
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.
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 of
train
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 sounds, around 10
million
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people
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 were having a hard time
day
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 and
night
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. Followed by
traffic
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 and
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train
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trains
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, aircraft
rated
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are rated
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the
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as the
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 third
noise
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 type having 5
million
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people
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 in
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day
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a day
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 and 1
million
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people
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 affected by the
noise
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. Most of the
people
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 were not
interracted
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interacted
 by industries except for
1million
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1 million
people
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at
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in
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daytime
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the daytime
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.
Simiarily
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Similarly
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also
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 displayed an almost similar pattern in the countryside.
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a
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the
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 small population in the rural areas,
less
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people
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 were affected by the
noise
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 compared to the city. Approximately 35
million
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people
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 in
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day
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a day
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 and 25
million
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people
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 at
night
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 were bothered by the
traffic
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noise
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. It was followed by 6~8
million
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people
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 affected by
train
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 and 1~3
million
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 citizens having a hard time because of aircraft noises. Interestingly, no one was affected by the industry sound in rural areas.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, noise, day, night, traffic, train, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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