The bar chart shows the average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1997 and 2003.

The bar chart shows the average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1997 and 2003.
The bar charts compare the average cost per km of clothing, imported from the EU to 6 different countries:Argentina,Brazil,Japan,China,India and Bangladesh between 1993 and 2003.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Argentina imported for the highest price in both years.
While
Bangladesh bought for the lowest price. In Brazil,
price
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did not change. Argentina got
kilometre
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kilometres
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of clothes for around 27
pounds
in 1993 and
this
number decreased to 25 in 2003. European Union exported clothes to Brazil for 23
pounds
per
kilometer
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kilometre
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. Japan,China and India bought
kilometre
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kilometres
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of clothes for 15,10 and 6
pounds
in 1993. These numbers changed to 14,17 and 12 respectively.Bangladesh imported from the European Union for 3
pounds
in 1993 and
this
number increased to 6 in 2003.
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