Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Animal experimentation has been debated for a long time.
While
some argue that testing on animals
is unjust and should be restricted, many believe that without the small sacrifice of animals
, humanity would not be able to progress. In my view, animal experimentation can be justified in certain cases, but alternative methods should be used whenever they are available and effective.
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also
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However
, there are alternatives to animal testing that are becoming more advanced. For instance
, computer-base
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computer-based
experiment
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precise results without the need for animal suffering. Change the verb form
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