The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates how many people participated in four types of
sport
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sports
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activities ( basketball,
tennis
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,
badmintion
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badminton
, and rugby) in one region from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
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, there was a high
number
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of people
taked
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took
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part in rugby at the start
the
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of the
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period,
while
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the
number
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of individuals
participated
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who participated
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in
tennis
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was the most popular
at the end
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of the period. The
number
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of people who
taked
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took
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part in both badminton and basketball was relatively stable. with regard to the rugby players, it began
at
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with
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the highest
number
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of players at just below 250, before dropping to exactly 150 in 2000 , which was the
seond
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second
highest
numbers
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number
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after
tennis
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, and decreased dramatically to 50 in 2005.
However
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, the
number
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of individuals who played
tennis
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was 150 in 1985
,
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and grew significantly to above 200 in the
last
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year.
On the other hand
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, the
amount
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number
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of
persons
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people
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who involved in both sports ( basketball and badminton) was remained stable ( just below 100 and exactly 50 respectively ) throughout the given period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tennis, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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