The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates how many people participated in four types of
sport
activities ( basketball, Change the noun form
sports
tennis
, Use synonyms
badmintion
, and rugby) in one region from 1985 to 2005.
Correct your spelling
badminton
Overall
, there was a high Linking Words
number
of people Use synonyms
taked
part in rugby at the start Correct your spelling
took
the
period, Change preposition
of the
while
the Linking Words
number
of individuals Use synonyms
participated
in Correct pronoun usage
who participated
tennis
was the most popular Use synonyms
at the end
of the period. The Linking Words
number
of people who Use synonyms
taked
part in both badminton and basketball was relatively stable.
with regard to the rugby players, it began Correct your spelling
took
at
the highest Change preposition
with
number
of players at just below 250, before dropping to exactly 150 in 2000 , which was the Use synonyms
seond
highest Correct your spelling
second
numbers
after Fix the agreement mistake
number
tennis
, and decreased dramatically to 50 in 2005. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of individuals who played Use synonyms
tennis
was 150 in 1985Use synonyms
,
and grew significantly to above 200 in the Remove the comma
apply
last
year.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
persons
who involved in both sports ( basketball and badminton) was remained stable ( just below 100 and exactly 50 respectively ) throughout the given period.Replace the word
people
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tennis, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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