The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newsport city centre from 2003-2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparations where relevant
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The chart illustrates the changes in rates of three different crime areas (burglary, car theft, and robbery) in Newport
city
between the years 2003 and 2012.
Capitalize word
City
Overall
, while
burglary had the highest crime rates, robberies remained the lowest among all throughout the period
. The car
theft Correct article usage
Car
crimes
surpassed burglaries after a certain period
.
In 2003, the rate of crimes
in burglary was highest at about 3400 incidents
, which then
decreased dramatically to around 1100 incidents
in 2008, and remained under 1500 incidents
until the end of the period
. The car theft crimes
were approximately 2800 incidents
in 2003, which decreased to almost 2000 incidents
in 2006. This
figure then
experienced a steady increase and reached around 2700 incidents
in 2012, with a small dip in 2011 at 2500 incidents
.
The robberies recorded in 2003 were about 600 incidents
, being the lowest than any of the other crimes
. The number of incidents
then
decreased to 500 in 2008, after which it experienced a fluctuation until the end of the period
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