The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two charts provide data about the gender and
number
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of
athletes
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who entered the Games between 1924 and 2012.
Overall
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, the bar chart indicates that the
number
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of male and female
participants
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in the Olympics increased from 1924 until the end of the period.
Furthermore
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, there were consistently more male than female
athletes
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every year. The line graph depicts the upward trajectory in the
number
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of
athletes
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. The bar chart illustrates that there was a massive disparity between the
number
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of men and women contestants until 2012. In 1924, the
number
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of male
participants
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was 3,000.
Subsequently
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, it increased gradually to reach a peak in 2012 of approximately 6,000, double over the years.
However
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, the
number
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of women
participants
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saw a steady upward trend from 1924 to 1984 with about 1,500
athletes
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. Following that, between 1984 and 2012, it skyrocketed to nearly 5,000, only approximately 1,000 fewer than male
participants
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. The line graph shows a similar trend; the figure for Olympians saw steady growth from 1924 to 1984 increasing from about 3,000 to 7,000 people.
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, it rose sharply between 1984 and 2012, at which point over 10,000
participants
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increased from the starting point about 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, athletes, participants with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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