The maps show a beachfront in Australia in 1950and today, Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the information about playground in the near of city, but until today, the beachfront
a
beachfront Correct article usage
the
of
Australia, in 1950 and now.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, a comparison of the two maps reveals a beachfront transformation from a new view.
In the 1950
, the road along the coast was Correct your spelling
1950s
a
much Correct article usage
apply
short
. The length of the road did not reach the lighthouse and Correct word choice
shorter
also
there wasAdd an article
a
the
saw
a number of significant changes. The most noticeable is that Wrong verb form
has seen
road
was extended to the lighthouse and close Correct article usage
the road
the
lighthouse surf club was constructed and Change preposition
to the
playground
was removed. Add an article
the playground
Instead
of this
place car park erected
.
In Add a missing verb
was erected
contract
, Correct your spelling
contrast
25
m Correct article usage
the 25
pool
is in
the east of the beach and Change preposition
on
also
in the west of the beach there was 25
m Correct article usage
a 25
pool
. The pool
which was located west of the beach was long - standed to 50m pool
in this
area wast
side of the Correct your spelling
was
pool
restaurant, surf club was demolished.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pool with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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