Some experts say for road safety, governments should encourage people to use bicycles instead of cars. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
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bicycles
ought to be promoted by governments for the sake of road safety. Use synonyms
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walking on the street, I believe that the negative effects outweigh the positives.
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bicycles
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of severe car Use synonyms
accidents
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while
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bicycles
as safe transportation.
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this
attempt would increase the possible risks for pedestrians to be involved in more fatal Linking Words
accidents
. In many countries, because regulations for Use synonyms
bicycles
are not as well developed as for cars, cycling on footpaths is not strictly prohibited and has caused many Use synonyms
accidents
with walkers. In Japan, two children became the victims of a collision with a cyclist pedalling at 30km/hour on the pavement. If the Use synonyms
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of cyclists increases, the frequency of Use synonyms
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people
.
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bicycles
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whereas
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...