Nowadays, most
people
tend to be careless about the fact behind
ultraprocessedCorrect your spelling
ultra-processed
ultra processed
food
as they are more
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about the spending on their groceries. In my opinion, many
people
could not care less about what kind of
food
they are consuming as long as it is still in their budget.
In modern society, instant
food
has become a trend for its efficiency. Most
people
would prefer to have supermarket
food
because it is easier to cook and
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less compared to
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regular
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regardless of the ingredients
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in
those Correct determiner usage
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processed
food
.
As a result
,
this
kind of diet has affected the health of the majority of
people
in many countries.
For instance
, in the United States when the number of citizens who consume ultraprocessed
food
is increasing, it is followed by the rise of diabetes cases.
In addition
, many companies have put the
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of ingredients and nutrition facts
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their products,
however
, only a few
people
who Correct pronoun usage
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are aware enough to read
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before
addChange the verb form
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itCorrect pronoun usage
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to their
groceriesFix the agreement mistake
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cart at the supermarket. Most
people
would look at the price first to decide whether or not they should buy any instant
food
.
It is
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that there are certain factors that affect
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decision
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. The majority of
people
believe that economic factor has the biggest influence on diet.
For example
, those from lower class
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who
livesCorrect subject-verb agreement
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in urban areas do not have any choices but to eat anything they
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afford. Educational background is the second reason that
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many
peopleChange noun form
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food
preferenceFix the agreement mistake
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. Those with health
backgroundChange the noun form
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such
as
or doctors usually have
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understanding of healthy and nutritious
food
.
Therefore
, they tend to control their diet to maintain their health.
As far as I am concerned, it is true that many
people
still do not have
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awareness of how their
food
is produced
due to
their tight budget.
Moreover
,
food
choices
also
depend on economic conditions and educational background.
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