The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spend doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graph illustrates changes in possession of electrical devices and time spent on
household
chores in one country from 1920 to 2019. Overall
, it can be seen that the use of electrical items increased within this
period
, in contrast
, the number
of hours
decreased between 1920 and 2019. (Overall
, there is a negative correlation between the two trends: the use of electrical items increased within this
period
, in contrast
, the number
of hours
decreased between 1920 and 2019.)
In 1920, washing machines were the most preferred in household
chores and they stood at 40%, while
vacuum cleaners were the second most demanded in apartments at 30%. In this
period
, the refrigerator was not popular as it owned by 0 %. In 1980, the demand for refrigerators increased and reached the
highest point at 100%. The same growing/burgeoning trend has Change the word
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also
been observed in 2 other household
items, as vacuum cleaners reached 90% of ownership in 1980,
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while
washing machines had a gradual decrease in comparison with 1960. All three household
appliances followed a similar trend till 2019. Both vacuum cleaners and refrigerators reached 100% in 2019 while
washing machines rose to 75% at the end
of the reported period
.
The number
of hours
spent on housework substantially decreased from 1920 to 1980 from 50 hours
per week to 15 hours
per week. The number
of hours
allocated for daily duties remained stable until 2000 while
there was a slight decrease between 2000 and 2019.Submitted by checkmyessay9 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words household, period, number, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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