The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spend doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spend doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The line graph illustrates changes in possession of electrical devices and time spent on
household
chores in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, it can be seen that the use of electrical items increased within
this
period
,
in contrast
, the
number
of
hours
decreased between 1920 and 2019. (
Overall
, there is a negative correlation between the two trends: the use of electrical items increased within
this
period
,
in contrast
, the
number
of
hours
decreased between 1920 and 2019.) In 1920, washing machines were the most preferred in
household
chores and they stood at 40%,
while
vacuum cleaners were the second most demanded in apartments at 30%. In
this
period
, the refrigerator was not popular as it owned by 0 %. In 1980, the demand for refrigerators increased and reached
the
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highest point at 100%. The same growing/burgeoning trend has
also
been observed in 2 other
household
items, as vacuum cleaners reached 90% of ownership in 1980
,
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while
washing machines had a gradual decrease in comparison with 1960. All three
household
appliances followed a similar trend till 2019. Both vacuum cleaners and refrigerators reached 100% in 2019
while
washing machines rose to 75%
at the end
of the reported
period
. The
number
of
hours
spent on housework substantially decreased from 1920 to 1980 from 50
hours
per week to 15
hours
per week. The
number
of
hours
allocated for daily duties remained stable until 2000
while
there was a slight decrease between 2000 and 2019.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, overall, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words household, period, number, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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